In this shocking video, Charlotte’s WCNC reports a 14-year-old Rowan County Middle School student taken into custody after dressing in a clown mask and raising a butcher knife in the school cafeteria.
The video is accompanied by an article that follows the story and acts as a script. It highlights the direct quotations and general format of the story and follows along with the video. But the written lede in the article is much different than that of the story. The first sentence of the article is extremely informative and cuts straight to the point. Right away it gives the age of the student, the name of the school, the type of knife used, the location of the event, the day and time frame, and information that the student had been taken into custody. Whenever listening to the story in the video, the anchor approaches the lede in a completely different way. It is much more dramatic using action words like fought and life in danger. The lede in the video also emphasizes the importance of the responding police officer who risked his life so that students could escape safely. This takes on an entirely different point of view than the article even though both are about the same crime.
Direct quotes are emphasized in videos very differently than in articles. This video uses direct quotes from the police officer who was at the scene of the crime by showing him on the screen actually answering questions about the crime. The producers of the video did not choose to overlay written blocked quotes to the video.
There are also voiceovers in the video with b-roll playing beneath them. When reporter, Ben Thompson, details the crime images pop up on the screen. The writing directly matches the images on the screen. Whenever Thompson mentions the knives and mask a picture appears from the scene of the two items. Thompson also mentions the student brought the knife in a backpack at which point the backpack and the knife fill the frame. A sound bite is added when the police officer speaks about the crime.
The general run down of this package follows the common form for television news stories. Here is a quick breakdown:
1. Anchor on camera
2. Tossed to Reporter live at the scene
3. Reporter voiceover (B-roll: knives, mask, sheriff, schoolyard, school building)
4. Interview of responding police officer
5. Reporter live at the scene
6. Anchor on camera